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Like many have said - it's a bit long-winded. A lot of this stuff you can either disclose on the phone or in person.

The whole point of placing a CL ad is to have people want to respond and ask more about it. BUT if you want to even GET a phone call/email inquiry, keep it short and sweet and just list the typical stuff (year, mileage, add-ons, etc..) to pique the interest of would-be buyers.

I'd pull the add, remove the stickers, and re-post with just the basics.

It's kind of like seeing a personals ad and they mention all their ailments in addition to their interests - would you even respond?? Hell no! Next!

 
What everyone said, boil the ad down to a Joe Friday report (Dragnet). Don't think anyone reads ads, more or less just skims though.

And Mike one thing I did take away from this...........You ain't no used car salesman.
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